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Offline Sami

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Typos - Report here
« on: August 18, 2009, 11:13:36 AM »

If you find any spelling errors please post them to this topic ...

  • Paste the line on which the typo is and highlight the misspelled word

  • Mention the page where this error is visible.

  • Please highlight the error and/or correction if possible.

  • Your message is removed from the topic after typo is fixed (to keep the topic short / readable).


« Last Edit: July 02, 2011, 04:35:57 PM by sami »

Offline groundbum2

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Re: Typos - Report here
« Reply #1 on: October 19, 2020, 06:35:15 AM »
Some of your staff groups are requesting their salaries to be raised. Please attend to this request as soon as possible to avoid employee morale from lowering.

the above is the warning when staff morale is low amid manual staff pay rises. Could I suggest this wording

Some of your staff groups are requesting that their salaries to be raised. Please attend to this request as soon as possible to avoid employee morale from lowering.

Offline sanabas

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Re: Typos - Report here
« Reply #2 on: October 19, 2020, 01:14:48 PM »
If adding ‘that’ to the line, need to delete the ‘to’. ‘Some of your staff groups are requesting that their salaries be raised’.

Offline Mort

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Re: Typos - Report here
« Reply #3 on: December 08, 2020, 07:55:44 PM »
In Age of Flight, the IL-96-400T was recently launched.

There is a duplicate "is" in the description of the model.

"The Ilyushin Il-96 is a four-engined long-haul widebody airliner. Although it has a strong resemblance to Il-86 the Il-96 is a new design. The -400 is a streched and improved variant with improved structure, avionics etc. and the T model is is the freighter version of the series."

Offline groundbum2

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Re: Typos - Report here
« Reply #4 on: January 18, 2021, 11:33:46 PM »
"The Lockheed L-1011 TriStar was the third widebody passenger jet airliner to enter operation, following the Boeing 747 and the McDonnell Douglas DC-10. The -500 variant has increased range and slightly shorther fuselage over -200 series."

shorter, ie no h

Offline groundbum2

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Re: Typos - Report here
« Reply #5 on: February 07, 2021, 12:01:31 AM »
on the initial open new base page

"To open a new base please select the desired airport and choose the aircraft you wish to rebase at this airport. An estimated cost analysis is then shown."

Suggest this

To open a new base please select the desired airport and choose the maximum aircraft size class you wish to rebase at this airport. An estimated cost analysis is then shown.

Offline NickSTL

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Re: Typos - Report here
« Reply #6 on: March 10, 2021, 01:07:15 AM »
On the receiving a mentoring request page:

"Please accept the request if able, and after that take a look at this airlines and give him appropriate advise via forum private messages."

Two things:

1) advise should be "advice"

2) Even though the male/female ratio is probably pretty high at AWS, I don't think that this message should automatically assume that the player is male. Alternatives would be "give him/her", "give him or her", "give them", or "give the player"

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Re: Typos - Report here
« Reply #7 on: May 03, 2021, 08:00:49 AM »
All plane launches have this typo,...

Bombardier has today announced plans of for their latest aircraft design, the Bombardier CRJ100LR.

 

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