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Author Topic: Typos - Report here  (Read 19498 times)

Offline Sami

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Typos - Report here
« on: August 18, 2009, 11:13:36 AM »

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« Last Edit: July 02, 2011, 04:35:57 PM by sami »

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Re: Typos - Report here
« Reply #1 on: October 17, 2018, 08:54:56 PM »
There's a typo of sorts in the Changes to your routes message that was recently sent out in GW4:

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Message from Civil Aviation Administration,

One of the airports you are flying to (Tokyo Haneda / RJTT / HND) is about to be changed as secondary airport with a new airport opening in the city.

Please note that your route management team will automatically relocate all the routes to the new airport when it opens. However you should manually check all the routes after the move is made as the new airport may not serve all the same domestic and/or international destinations as the old airport!

The airport will be closed in 365 days. The new airport opening nearby is Tokyo Narita (RJAA - NRT).

The affected routes are:

I've highlighted the two important bits, the first (rightly) states that HND will become a secondary airport, which is accurate enough, however the message then goes on to suggest HND will be closed in 365 days, when in fact it should probably say something along the lines of "changed".

From a grammatical standpoint, I would also suggest slightly rewording the first highlighted sentence so it reads "...about to become a secondary airport due to the planned opening of a new airport in the city."

 

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